Unbelievably slow pacing. The MC registers for a fight in chapter six. The fight in question is scheduled to take place later on the same day. By chapter twenty, the MC still hasn't participated in the fight, and only a couple hours have passed since the events of chapter six.
I agree with a previous poster about how the author Draaaggggggsssss the story to the extreme. Chapters 6 (I think) through 25 are all about ONE fight....and it's still going. This story seemed interesting, but it's too much of a points vacuum.
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I want to like this story but not only is its pacing slow its filled with needless side stories that seem to repeat the same stuff like "oh no I lost strength" which I get its part of his ability but only need to demonstrate its happening once or twice and we get it now move on with story. If this story is doing this right out the gate I can't be hopeful for future chapter doing any less if not more.
the story concept is good, game talent in martial art world. ealier chapter has a nice progress, the plot is not too fast and also not too slow. but in the 10+ chapters the author lost his brain juice and wasted 10 chapters more with fillers that can be deleted without disturbing the plot and then the story become unworthy to read anymore. so dont wasted ur coins or tickers to read it. i drop this one for now... i hope author rewrite the story with less fillers and less wasted chapters.
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Personally, it think the twist seems cool and it not the usual video game or wuxia style that copied and pasted.
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drag one fight from chapter 5 all way to chapter 40