I like this book BUT too much useless dialog on every chapter just to make it longer to read. So enough is enough. Going to drop this book for now, might pick it up in the future if i have nothing to read.
Hey fool, you are missing chapters, have mixed up chapters and aren’t listening to us or anybody. This has made the story confusing and mixed up. Now fix it, because I have complained to the site already. Good day not so smart one.
The story itself is a wonderful concept, a splicing of a super scientific world with a fantasy world. The problem is execution. The story reads as if it’s being written by someone with English as their second language or straight from voice diction. The characters have weak impressions and the story rambles around with events and character actions that don’t really make much sense. There are some redeeming qualities however as the author often avoids common tropes (through design or mistake I can’t tell) and takes time to go back and review his work. Best of all he keeps to his release schedule.
Just came here to remind everyone this is a reupload and what this novels 2nd or 3rd attempt at existing because of rampant racism and NTR where the protagonists lover gets raped repeatedly and he can’t stop it or doesn’t. This novel is translated poorly compared to the first iteration It’s filler is bad and there is low progression in chapters so it’s expensive to pay for This novel is mild trash that deserves 3 stars except for its a reupload that deleted around 170 bad reviews when it was fresh to try and make sure people wanted to read it I rated this novel 3 stars, because well, it’s not worth more but it was deleted so it deserves 1 Star forever in my heart
If you want to the mc an op ability, at least make the world and the other characters interesting. Giving the mc such an ability where he has no struggle, makes the story get boring very fast.
Not my cup of tea since I’ve already matured from the naïveté of these type of novels. I doubt this will be chosen. There’s nothing really interesting about this, just feels like another replica of the same degenerative novels that doesn’t specify on a true reality, even if it’s fiction. Don’t bullshit me, just read My Extraordinary Achievements, for a “better” version of this novel.
Story is interesting but somtimes story pace is either very fast or slow, sometimes seems bit repetitive and there could be more character development as there is no interaction with student in 2&3 year in academy but dozens of time MC lost in self monolog and he only trains but still interesting and give it a try and update are delayed in past two months
this is a Pretty well written piece I liked chapter 1 it did do a good job and was interesting to read their were some weak points but overall I give it a 7.5 out of 10 good intro am Looking forward to reading more.
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