The narration was exceptional. The perks of being a native speaker. Although not all native speakers are well verse in grammar so I appreciate the author's supremacy among others. The story was interesting for me so this novel will surely garner attention in the near future. I am not much of a critique and I say this is outstanding for me. Kudos!
Amazing. This book makes a lot of points. Great character qualities and a very good plotted story. I liked how every paragraph is worded just enough. I enjoyed it.
How could I not give this story five stars?! this is incredibly written. I felt like I was really there, becoming entranced in the story. if you're looking for a novel written like a professional, then this is it people! just read the first chapter and you'll be hooked!
I like this story so much! I enjoy reading it and yeah, i really like it. The author have done a good job in writing this story. So, its a 5 star from me
While there is world building at the start, the introduction of Xing Tian as the ‘Asian girl’ is a bit disconnected in the first two chapters. It is systematically written and there is a lot of hard work done on the novel. The novel probably belongs to the cyberpunk genre . Just a personal opinion on my part, it is a nuance but each new character generation tend to be a little choppy at the start. This choppiness isn’t a grammatical issue but rather how the content flows. Fight/combat scenes while described, requires more action, shorter description to give it an ‘action’ feel. However it is my personal preference. Others may prefer in depth descriptions. Overall, nice work!
I love the whole idea of this story and the world-building. I can't wait for more! I love the use of they in the first chapter. I also feel the 2020 simulation feels a bit like last year. It was all so strange. Like nothing was real.
The name is quite catchy and you get the main concept of the story from the synopsis as well. So far I read, the story has potential and if you keep working on it, I think it will be an amazing piece of work!
The concept is fantastic! Although I have only read few chapters of your book, I was drawn inside that world! The only few points that I'd like to point out is the usage of tenses (since you started with past tense, I think you should use past participle words.) and filter words. Besides that, I think this novel is going to be fantastic!
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Keep it up author.