Genius Mage in a Cultivation World

The beginning was good, but when characters from the MC's past started to appear the story became confusing, it seems that I skipped book 1 and started directly in the book 2 because many characters from the MC's past appear quickly and without much explanation about them.

The MC doesn't really feel like a mage, he just seems like a cultivator focused on spells rather than weapons and that point spoiled the novel for me.

The author had a great idea but failed to execute.

So, the writing problem is the 2nd of two problems that forced me to leave the "chat". My google translator tries very hard, but the translation comes out terrible, I mean that the edited text is translated very well. Please understand and forgive my pain) The first and main problem is in the narrative thread, it is like an electrocardiogram in a sick person. Jumps from side to side, like in that cartoon. I seem to understand everything, but if I get distracted for a second, I will never remember what this passage is about ...
Thank you, this is a rare case when I was not very upset about the time spent. Finished at chapter 78.

Amazing, simply amazing. It lives up to the quality of MotivatedSloth's other works.

I could feel the characters confusion when he couldn't understand anything being said.

Go Read!

The first chapter gives out as little as possible and it pulls you in and keeps you interested to read on more and more.
I feel like it's a bit early for me to say anything about the character but I have a feeling that I'll end up liking the MC. Just a gut feeling.
Amazing writing, amazing story, and world-building is just *chef's kiss.*
Good luck to the author!

Awesome synopsis and great character build up. The story has good flow and rhythm the story expresses the creativity of the Author. Am a sucker for revengeful plot.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The novel is really lit. The bg,setting and plot are to the point. I envy writer how can he write so well. omo writer give me half  of your writing.
The book is highly recommended to the new readers. A book worth reading. Best of luck in advance.

Hey you, you there. What are you waiting for? Grab your popcorn and enjoy the reading!

The great Sloth, is a man of motivation, creating the most dynamic of characters with the flick of his pen, Keep your eye on this novel its sure to be a hit! Amazing story 10/10