Thank you everyone for supporting me till the WPC. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
please do tell me what I wrote wrong and how I can improve it. thank you
Keep it up. ... the story is going great and i hope that you keep writing at this pace.... .Ig you want it as a long term story as per you mentioned. . don't worry I will give you my power stones.
The story is excellent...............................................
I just hope that you don't pace it too fast..................................
This story is good when you look for it as a long term story....ATB I will cheer you as a reader
Its a good story......I just hope that it might go on like kingdom manga..........that story is a long term one and i want this to be a long term one as well.......
Not a bad story at all. great development and a good pace. Its still in the beginning stages but that's fine. There is a lot of potential to the story.
It's cool in a very unique way. The novel has a great potential and it was such a good read. The ML left such a great and lasting impression on me .Great job author!
it's excellent...... I love the setting of the story and i also liked that you didn't make the mc op in a single chapter and the romance is also quite good so that it won't hinder the pace of action later
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please do tell me what I wrote wrong and how I can improve it. thank you
I just hope that you don't pace it too fast..................................
This story is good when you look for it as a long term story....ATB I will cheer you as a reader