Genesis of Earth

The characters lack depth. Especially the wife. I would have forgotten her if she wasn’t mentioned once in a while. The protagonist doesn’t seem to think before acting, making me wonder why he did this or that. An exemple is having the USA agents killed. It doesn’t help anyone. Also, he doesn’t seem bothered after being directly responsible for the murder of hundreds of people.The technology he is offered is way ahead of what Earth is capable, and he should have to spend a serious amount of time and ressources developing the intermediate steps. He reach those steps too easily (if he didn’t bypass them). The author should check technology trees in games such as the one who share its name with the title of this work, and remember that theory and practice/application are differents.Also, the system rewards are much to great for the tech development he completed.World background is lacking. Little to no description of the characters, surroundings, buildings and inventions.Interesting, but the execution need some work.

so far I've read, I'm a bit confused. are the different chapters going to be POVs of Edwin and Everett

Da best story i have read yo! Lol, i love this series too much, i think this novel should get to published wkwkwk, i really. The character grow slowly and steady, yet its not boring af. The mc is not so op, it have the strong side and bad side. Honestly if u are a moba player, this novel should be on your MUST READ library

Silence

I apologize for the unkept promise of 50+ chaps. In addition to my dayjob, I took up a Masters degree (yay!) and was having freelance editing gigs, not to mention some people troubles so I couldn't make myself write (y'all know potatoes suck at social interactions). Currently, I am also teaching Business courses in a local university. Talk about sleep. What is sleep?

It was quick and simple answer. I don't want to reason out more. It would be unnecessary.

"Can't you do something about the Reiatsu controlling thing?" Ichigo asked not really liking the idea of being controlled.

Then i just got on my car and while going, I just saw the Chief and the officer looking at me with some sort of suspicion.

I went in the Caxtec industries and asked for Miss Witherfield. I waited for an hour or so and then a woman in her early thirties came in with people swarming around her. She wore a grey fish tail skirt with a black shirt and grey blazer. Her hair were tied up in a pony tail. Everyone stood up to greet her, she ignored them and went straight into her office. I looked around and snuck up behind them. I knocked on the door and a female voice said "Come in"

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

But the meteor men beg to differ

"How have you been, my little baby bun?" Akane asks, speaking in hush voice and smiling as she kisses the boy on the lips lightly.