A unique concept.... For me cos i rarely see a book with this concept. A robot with a few flesh and blood? Cool! Lake made entirely of beers? Just imagining that makes me drunk!
Giving this a perfect review simply because I love how the characters interact and especially the way Zick cuss! Haha, I know... I’m weird. I am looking for more updates in this book! Love it!
Really love what the earlier chapters set up! Love the character design, love the world and love the whole overall lore! Interesting characters in Jack and Zick, and seeing a great story moving forward!
Okay so it has been a while since I wrote a review, so take this one with a grain of salt. Some chaps felt short but since they covered the event well, it was fulfilling.
The writing quality is good IMO. I am mostly saying that because the sentences are easy to understand. There seems to be a need for mid dialogue punctuations in some sentences, but this is an easy fix.
No comments on the stability of updates: As someone who cares about quality more than quantity. But when I say so many chaps on 28th I was like :O
The story development is somewhat fast with a lot of dialogues... But I like it since the characters are portrayed well.
Now the interesting part here is the Character Design... The dialogues are set well making it easier to understand the characters.
The world background part needs a bit of work here IMO... mostly because it's overshadowed by the dialogues in many chapters. But this mostly depends on how well one can imagine the surrounding. /me secretly screams GIMME MORE SCIENCE IN SCI_FI...
Sci-fi settings aren't something I'm familiar with, nonetheless, the book doesn't fail to reel me in. The comedic aspects are entertaining and the world is fascinating. The writing gets a little windy at times but it doesn't dampen my experience. I have faith that the author can achieve something great.
Character is good, with their own flaws. From my first impression, Zick is my favorite character followed by his older brother. The plot is interesting so far. While world-building is a bit vague... just a bit. OVERALL GOOD STUFF!
I found out that it is really a nice read. as a sci-fi and cyberpunk genre that I can see through here which are my favorite.
I love how the author made the character as humane as possible, but for story development aspect. the pace starting from ch 4 is pretty unstable. try to made it consistent and it will be a nice read!
I love the wording of the book and the characters are very interesting. I personally enjoy a little bit of comedy here and there and that's what I love about it. I hope the author keeps up the great work!
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The writing quality is good IMO. I am mostly saying that because the sentences are easy to understand. There seems to be a need for mid dialogue punctuations in some sentences, but this is an easy fix.
No comments on the stability of updates: As someone who cares about quality more than quantity. But when I say so many chaps on 28th I was like :O
The story development is somewhat fast with a lot of dialogues... But I like it since the characters are portrayed well.
Now the interesting part here is the Character Design... The dialogues are set well making it easier to understand the characters.
The world background part needs a bit of work here IMO... mostly because it's overshadowed by the dialogues in many chapters. But this mostly depends on how well one can imagine the surrounding. /me secretly screams GIMME MORE SCIENCE IN SCI_FI...
I love how the author made the character as humane as possible, but for story development aspect. the pace starting from ch 4 is pretty unstable. try to made it consistent and it will be a nice read!