Gate of Immortality

It has a good starting point and might even have a chance to explode in the future, but there are too many grammatical errors, etc. Of course, I am not good at it too but it would've been better if it was good enough, at least where you don't find it hard to read.

I hope the author will find an editor but you can also use this to hone your writing skills. Good luck!

Fantastic book even if some grammar issues BUT it has been discontinued right in the middle of it. It’s really a shame because I was enjoying this book.

This novel was good,, ,I don't knw why the author left it incomplete

I'm old, so my patience is thin for this confusing and poor novel, like i always say:Author go and take any other job to survive, writing is not for you. Laalalaslslalz Laalalaslslalz

This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................

This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................