I love my Isekai; However, this was totally different from the norm, the author portrays the story in such a way that you're drawn in and before you know it you're already reading the next chapter!
The writing quality was excellent! The sentence structure was top notch and the wording is easy to understand. They're also talented with imagery which made the chapters captivating and fun to read. Despite me not knowing much about Ren or Adelaide yet I love them so freaking much! Giving the reader little to no information about a character is a great way to draw them in as they're willing to fill in the blanks.
Conclusion: A talented writer with a twist on the Isekai genre. I can't wait to read more and I'll definitely be looking out for the next chapter.
REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean)
(Writing this about five chapters in)
The prologue starts off mysterious and overall intriguing, making me want to continue onto the next chapter right away.
In terms of the writing quality, it is highly-detailed and immersive; lending an smooth visualization of the world the characters are in.
The characters themselves are interesting, human in the fact that they are flawed.
I can clearly see the author devotion in the book. It's extremely interesting and captivating. I give it full points because I see the high potential in it.
When I saw people say they had favorite books, books that originated from this app, I thought that it was pure insanity…That was until I found Garden of the Abyss. This novel is
not only my favorite on this app, but it is quite possibly one of my all time favorites. The immersion, characters, and plot are all peak. Every arc so far has been amazing, especially Purgatory. The author blends fantasy and horror splendidly. I would often find myself rooting for the heroes and then the villains because their causes resonated with me. Garden was my light when I was in a dark place as cringe as it sounds. When I was feeling down I could always come back for a reread, and not get bored. I'm here now for that exact reason and found it crazy that I have not written a review, but hey, better late than never right. I know that this won't be everyone's cup of tea, but I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.
It has everything a story needs in my opinion. Good Characters, world-building, an amazing plot, and character development. Not to mention the authors writing style is simply enjoyable.
Some things to note before hopping into this story:
-This is a DARK-isekai, the protagonist is weak and flawed, and the world is cruel. Don't expect a power-fantasy, this is a story focusing on the trials the protagonist will face and how he grows to overcome them.
-As this is a dark story, please be cautious of vivid, traumatic imagery described in the story.
-If death is something you can't handle, this isn't the story for you.
Popular Reviews
The writing quality was excellent! The sentence structure was top notch and the wording is easy to understand. They're also talented with imagery which made the chapters captivating and fun to read. Despite me not knowing much about Ren or Adelaide yet I love them so freaking much! Giving the reader little to no information about a character is a great way to draw them in as they're willing to fill in the blanks.
Conclusion: A talented writer with a twist on the Isekai genre. I can't wait to read more and I'll definitely be looking out for the next chapter.
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean)
The prologue starts off mysterious and overall intriguing, making me want to continue onto the next chapter right away.
In terms of the writing quality, it is highly-detailed and immersive; lending an smooth visualization of the world the characters are in.
The characters themselves are interesting, human in the fact that they are flawed.
not only my favorite on this app, but it is quite possibly one of my all time favorites. The immersion, characters, and plot are all peak. Every arc so far has been amazing, especially Purgatory. The author blends fantasy and horror splendidly. I would often find myself rooting for the heroes and then the villains because their causes resonated with me. Garden was my light when I was in a dark place as cringe as it sounds. When I was feeling down I could always come back for a reread, and not get bored. I'm here now for that exact reason and found it crazy that I have not written a review, but hey, better late than never right. I know that this won't be everyone's cup of tea, but I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.
Some things to note before hopping into this story:
-This is a DARK-isekai, the protagonist is weak and flawed, and the world is cruel. Don't expect a power-fantasy, this is a story focusing on the trials the protagonist will face and how he grows to overcome them.
-As this is a dark story, please be cautious of vivid, traumatic imagery described in the story.
-If death is something you can't handle, this isn't the story for you.
With that said, please enjoy!.