Ok the novel isn't the worst I've read. It started out decently, but it is the first I have ever dropped. That is because of the pure idiocy in which the author built the world. He builds up this apocalypse that they have to go to for a certain amount of time a year. Makes it dangerous and high stakes where you need to eat and live there or you die. Then makes it into a 'game' that you have to play in a gaming rig, even though apparently you need to play or it drags you in against your will. The player can also log off at almost anytime they sleep and still has to eat in the 'real' world after getting out of the gaming rig. I can suspend my disbelief for a lot of things, but this bugged me so much I just can't keep reading.
I hoped that you would be here :D nice job man, its the type of story I like, there may be some mistakes but in general, the writing is good,the story development may seem common to other people but I think it has great potential. the hidden agenda of 001 OS is keeping me on my toes and I like it! XD the only problem I have is that you didn't really say much about weapons and the technological advancements of humanity, it can't be just HUD and space travel. all in all the book deserves to be known by more people, keep up the good work.
"Now I cannot divorce her right away. I will have to wait until she can be fertile again, if not, I will be accused of abandoning her in the difficulties, in addition, she came healthy for the Fang Family ... Tsk! So troublesome! "Fang Lian thought with a look even colder than the ice.
She had already decided to give him a chance way before her accident and now she was trying to run away from her responsibilities. Suddenly, Shen Ya felt bad for Lu Jian.
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