Game Portal : Making a Multi-Billion Dollar Company!

Honestly its good but selling magical stuff is a good way to get kidnapped and tested on and experimented on

I despise people who write a good review before even reading a novel, but now I have to do it too. To be fair I won't give it a five.
Anyways, you deserve a 4-star, just by having a single fl, not having a harem is already a rare occurrence lol. I'll write a normal review later after reading some chapters, maybe after 50.

I can't really say anything, it's a fun read. I recommend it. I know I said I'll give a proper review, but I really can't say anything. It's a solid read.
I didn't find any grammar errors that I can point out.
The character, in my opinion, is nothing special, there was some development, nothing crazy.
The world is nothing special, it's like real life.
The story is decent, it was fast-paced, but not rushed, and you can follow it without a problem.
Overall it's a decent, good read.

It's a good book. I like the fact that the power doesn't change but the mc has to think of ways to use it effectively. The characters tho they feel 2d dimensional most of the time but there are good bases for good character writing here. World background is something I am more interested in it's very subtle but it's working I guess.

The novel is good, but it would be better if during the period the phone came in contact with the radiation, the portal and the phone combined, allowing him to enter the other world through the phone portal.
Because a smart person can think of why he bought that mansion.