if you think this novel is wrong, then go and read different books and get back to reality. all of you guys still dreaming and don't know or see what is really happening in real life all over the world for so many years.i don't say it is ok, but what can we do, it is here for more then 2000 years or even more. and it will continue to happen for thousand of years.if i or others can do something about it, i will support them with all my heart. but after what happened to me personally i see the dark and ugly humanity. and if you want to survive in this world, the real world then you need to accept what happened all around us and not complaint.if you complaint, you think things will be different? i wish it was, but it still the same for thousands of years,so if an Author write a story and novel that have many things that we have in real life then why not read them. i will read this novel as much as they give us chapters to read, if it will be pick up. i think it look like a really promising novel :)
So far the novel has great potential. I like how you show their emotions. Both of your novels are great to read...................................................................
I like the novel, but it has the same problem that similar novels often face: the main character could theoretically increase his strength at a rapid pace, but he’s held back by one thing: **morality**. His grandmother outright offered to help him earn soul points, but he refused simply because she’s his grandmother. Seriously, that’s frustrating. Because of his moral compass, he’s ignoring opportunities that could potentially save his and his family’s lives. He was told that there are entire organizations stronger than even the empire that has started hunting him, yet he keeps making foolish decisions that could prove fatal. One such decision is his failure to make a soul contract with the branch of his family he discussed overthrowing the empire with. It’s foolish—he’s been betrayed twice already, but it seems he hasn’t learned anything from those experiences. Also, this idiot isn’t even trying to track down his former friend who betrayed and killed him, even though that same friend knows about the artifact. His wife also told him there’s a high chance that people will hunt him for it. On top of that, Alexander's previous soul specifically asked him to take care of the children he had with that same friend’s wife, to prevent that friend from killing them too, but he hasn’t even thought about them yet. It’s also frustrating how he went against his entire family over the maid. It’s irrational to oppose those who are supposed to accept you as their leader for such a reason. If he had simply removed her from her position as a maid and taken her as a concubine, it would have been understandable. However, the way he handled the situation only highlighted his lack of necessity and impulsiveness. For God’s sake, he’s 60 years old in Alexander’s body and also about 30 years old as Jack, meaning he has lived for a total of 90 years. Yet he still doesn’t demonstrate a satisfactory level of maturity, despite spending many years at war.
The children of Venus and Aphrodite looked at their mom with gaping jaws, while the other demigods looked at her in awe and can't believe their eyes that the love goddess destroyed monsters, especially the experienced demigods. Chiron could not believe that the gods came to protect and help their children and go against the ancient laws.
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