Game Descends: All The Skills I Have Are Boss Skills

Bad world building
Boring lack competitiveness
Plot doesn't make sense
Math problem
Lack details

the writing is poor, details don't match up, it's very basic with so many plot holes and loops I'm surprised webnovel actually picked it up

Anyone know what's the new of the raw version? and no Mr_N00B it ain't that. Nor is it what you said taoistq77svs.

It's good, surprisingly. Raw?

Found it to be average at best. Tge MC is boring with no real development of world, character, and story. While I do understand that it's only the beginning and may just take awhile to Rev up as a trial read it's all I can go off of.

Very bad worldbuilding.
The main character is two dimensional.
No real background, and acts irrationally.
I don't know how other people rated it so highly.

Honestly, this novel's writing is pretty bad. There are so many plot holes and stuff that just don't make sense. It's really hard to keep up with what's happening because the details don't match up, and the story just keeps repeating itself. Hopefully, the author will work on their writing skills and make a better story next time.

I just need the raws..........
Anyone???