Fury of the fallen

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

''Bah, who wants your porks? At least make it thousand demonic beast steaks!'' Fatty bragged about his appetite as he grabbed the duck drumstick from the table triumphantly.

Writing Quality: 4/5It was not bad, better than a lot I seen on here. Keep up with the good grammar. Although the dialogue bothers me because I don't know who is talking.Updating Stability: 5/5I give that to everyoneStory Development: 4/5Good plot, although it is more descriptions and less dialogue. I did enjoyed the storyline and pacing.Character Design: 5/5Not bad, I don't have much to say though.World Background: 5/5Extremely descriptive, doesn't live anything out on how the world is.Keep up the good work!

the book has a good vocabulary development and it is very good

great novel although many people will be turned off by the endless sex in the beginning it gets decreased later and start focusing on the world building also there is action when there is need for action so people should give it a try