I like how the story is progressing so far but I'll suggest you to proofread the chapters once as there are a few grammatical errors. I've pointed out a few though. Anyway, great job! Keep writing!
Great Idea but too many ascenin things the priotities of the mc are all over thje place and he is supposed to a survivalist. so much potential but not maximized not a bad read tho
Yup, this is great. Need more chapters. MC seemed to have its own qualities and 3vem though it's a little farfetched I still like it. Continue the good work author.
CONSIDER THIS A SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION FROM THE AUTHOR. I HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY MY WORK AND THE JOURNEY OF BUILDING CIVILIZATION. PLEASE RATE THE STORY IF YOU ENJOY IT!
A well written story that is occasionally mired with grammatical errors, however they do not detract from the reading much. The setting of the story is interesting: it's an isekai with a prehistoric twist made possible with the help of cliff-kun (since trunk-san was on holiday). Some people might get triggered by the fact that the MC got cucked so soon in the plot, but it really is just setting the story and quickly gets shuffled away so don't judge the story and drop it so quickly.
Again, there were some errors grammatically speaking, but it's not that bad. One thing that I think does need improving is the characters' description. For example, Night, the only thing I know about her is that she's got dark eyes, tanned, and has toned legs. That's it. Not much to go on. Other than that, there's not much else to complain about.
Oh but there's one thing and this isn't the author's fault. It's just ... I was laughing with tears when I read the synopsis and even when reading parts of the story. I mean, in this setting - the prehistoric setting - were the girls really beautiful? I mean ... I don't think they had brushes so uh ... kissing is ... yeah. Then there's ... they barely had knives so no scissors or shears ... which means bushy outta control body hair. And I'm part of the shave/trim team so ... yeeaaahhh.
But I digress. The point is, the story's good and give it a shot.
Honestly, this novel is a gem. I've only ever found a couple of other novels that were this good, and I've read many. I'm sad that there aren't hundreds of chapters, but I guess that just means I'm early to the bandwagon. I hope the author gets a lot more support from others so this novel can keep going strong.
I think that this is an interesting story. I like the whole pre-historic concept and the world background that I want to keep reading it.I also like that the male lead is dependable and has a good head on his shoulders. Good job Author!
A captivating story full of rage, energy and intrigue. Easy to read. The text block is smooth, everything is clear. The only mistake that caught my eye after reading the 7 chapters was the incomplete title page. No title, no author. In general, it’s very serious work. Which proves the number of readings.
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Again, there were some errors grammatically speaking, but it's not that bad. One thing that I think does need improving is the characters' description. For example, Night, the only thing I know about her is that she's got dark eyes, tanned, and has toned legs. That's it. Not much to go on. Other than that, there's not much else to complain about.
Oh but there's one thing and this isn't the author's fault. It's just ... I was laughing with tears when I read the synopsis and even when reading parts of the story. I mean, in this setting - the prehistoric setting - were the girls really beautiful? I mean ... I don't think they had brushes so uh ... kissing is ... yeah. Then there's ... they barely had knives so no scissors or shears ... which means bushy outta control body hair. And I'm part of the shave/trim team so ... yeeaaahhh.
But I digress. The point is, the story's good and give it a shot.
Author, good work, quality content.