well after all of this premium thing.. this app happened.. ill be likely stop reading QI.. and go back to WW.. haha.. these reforms is like digging their own pit to bury their selves.. no one to blame with their greed for money.. you fuckingg people.. ****h you QI..sincerely,freeloader
it start of good even with stupid chineese stuff but it gets worse and worse as the story goes on i've only read 400chp so far and it's hard to continue1: the worst thing by far is how nothing make sense we have.....btw spoilers the wolf lord who is in the 5th stage of pedsu nascant soul yet he suddenly become 7th stage somehow(each stage can 1shot the previous so it was massive increase ) and there is "reincarnation of wolf lord" who suddenly become a piece of someone else but we figure out later he was split in the close past way after the wolf lord died so.. wtf??? to explain in more detail there is that supreme demon who attacked the universe one of mc women was there the demon was too op so she kept reversing time and space to stop him until he start losing his memeoirs and being split into pieces one of them was the winged wolf lord( reincrnation of the wolf lord) but HOW because the wolf lord died long ago.. it's just bullshit thereb is much more but i don't want to write2:the wasted power system if everyone is a cultivator why ranks like "silver and gold" just name them golden core and nascant souls i first though becasus the story had diffferent power systems but that wasn't the case3: mc low iq surprised me he was smart at first but became dumber and dumber although to be truthful he had his smart moments it's just he is like someone Affected by an illness to be exact the chineese mc illness he is a smart mc by natrue but this illness keep supressing him making him do idiotic stuff like: he saved a women once for no reason from others who followed her becauss she was the key to the treasure we later find out the whole place is a plot by her ancestor to find a suitable husband for her and the treasures are all bait for people and it will all be hers and he even used that medicine(forgot it's name) that make people horny so the mc do it with her and take "responsobility" mc avoid its and figure out the plot but he is just.. "ok it's her treasure her fate i have nothing to do with it i will give it up" like he wasn't tricked the whole time if that's the case then why did he save her since these men who attacked her also had a fate but he ruined there chances3: numbers make no sense u know don't be susprised to find 30billon become 300million then 3billion then 30million it's very inconsistint 4: although minor it's annoying he keep provoking people into attacking him than gets angry and scram at them "courting death" when they attack himi hate it...5: i truly belive the mc have some aura from past life that seduce women because it's hard to belive these sane women actually waste millions of years searching for his reincarnation just because he helped them oncethe worst is one women who he saved from gangsters for no reason except the mc need to save women and suddenly became oppssed with him... the worst part is? she is someone like him in a simulation the worst thing that could have happened is her dying and failing the simulation nothing serious she is someone who saved 1000worlds she should have saw so many worst thing so... why..?.. there is wayy more stuff but i don't want to continue typing... yet with all thses stuff i was able endure and read 400chp and i will probably complete it which proves how good of a novel it isyes the bad things are wayy more then the good one's yet i still like itworld building is really good the enemies aren't idiots, except for females who get attracted for no reason side characters are good(espeaclly my boy xin qongting or smth like that chinese names are hard to remember the genius scientfic guy i really liked him and wished he was the mc)and the main concept is very goodit's like a broken daimond it lost it's shine with so many cracks but it's still a daimond none the less
Good so far Author. There are a few grammatical mistakes and the formatting is a bit off but it's good. Maybe you could find an editor to edit these chapters.
A good read and a very likeable Mc. Since the author is new it makes it even more interesting. Please continue with more chapters as I am really liking it so far.
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