very good writing quality that could be further enhanced by changing how you write his thoughts,world background much known but nothing bad presently, character design is very good just needs more depth.
To his story is so good I like it. The grammar is also Not bad in my humble opinion. Kairen is an interesting character to read and also feel relatable, is also easy to understand his struggling and dielima even though I wish he's not so 'stupid' cough. anyway nice story your writing.
I do really enjoy this novel for various reasons, however, I hope it doesn't go premium even if it starts to come out at a faster pace since I have a limit to the number of premium novels I can read.
This was the day for which i was waiting for a long time , but when the day finally came in my life my world tottaly turned upside down before i could understand anything.
What could I do? So, in the end, I forcefully endured eating the remaining half of the sandwich. "Dad can I ask permission to read those boons in the living room" just say yes will you. "Oh so you like books, alright but make sure to return it back to its proper place when you're done".
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