Like the fact that the mc is op in the real world. The beginning is different from the usual mmo novels since he had the money and from this fact it can take some time before he comes in to conflict with other clans .
writing quality isn't the worst but far bellow the standards of what the rating of the book would suggest, basically reviews seem lil fake 😅 honestly just barely better than some mtl novels that webnovel puts out.story development is very weird at times, there is no pace to it, stuff just happens without a good reason, basically a lot of forced plots just because you as the author can do it i guess. I guess it's due to being an inexperienced author and it's hard to make that plot development seem more natural you, idk... probably know about this problem yourself.characters are honestly bad... like they aren't even budget author pov's copies, copies so bad that it's insulting to the originals. Ye I said it, might seem harsh but that's the reality of things, you have 30+ reviews telling you how good the book is, but it's not.... not even close. the idea it self is good but execution is way offI could go in deeper but I won't lol, maybe will check this book out again in the far future and write another review 🥱
here for the event....The story is good and the pacing is also good. The grammar is alright. on the side note: I think you posted 2 versions of the 2nd chapter.
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