To be honest I like the story background but the inner writing I don't like it. Reading the first volume I think that the first disciple has no respect and gratitude for MC as her master, it's more like a casual respect not like a nascent soul stage cultivator master should have.
Most MMO Novels always begin with Main Characters who began with a 'Cheat', and this MMO is no different. As far as I can tell from the few Chapters so far, the Novel can be promising but is unlikely to be memorable. It's good for a nice, satisfying read, but will be unlikely to leave anything behind. A typical, decent story, I guess.
The first chapter introduces the main character and her love interest, and there is some foreshadowing. The plot is interesting. The idea and setting of the novel is great.
" I-I'm so sorry ... Umm ... Bye ?" , he apologized in his sexy deep voice yet a. it squeaky as he was nervous maybe . He didn't even wait for my response . Not like I could form any words .
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