Forbidden system

its quite great actually because I like inchest but I feel like this one is a copy becouse in another novel called Taboo system I guess is same as this but I feel this one is a rush and its hard to understand the plot.

Feels too much like i’m reading “my taboo system” even if author said the plot will be different and the writing/grammar doesnt help it either

very good

why can't the novel be continued. It's can of a let down

Well The Writing Quality Is Good, There Is Room For Story Development.
Author can Try To liven Up Characters By Emphasizing More On Emotional Aspect as well as their featured.
The Most Promising Thing, Is World Background. Which Author Can Further Improvised To Inter-Galatic Wars or more As Author may see fit, As There will be different species in future author can I have our MC s*x With Inter-species.Well Author May Need To First As Public Opinion As There May Not Be Many People Who are Interested In Such Kinky Stuff...

Well Last But Not Least It Has Room For Growth But The Book Has Not Been Updated For Probably 5 Months So I Gave 1 Star If Possible I won't give a star
I ain't Stingy, But Yeah If You Dropped This Please Mentioned It So Others May Not Get Their Hopes Irked Upon This Story .

I Will Change This Review After Author Has Upoladed Enough Chapters For Further Assessment

Thank You ❤️

Good to read
Great story development
Good writing
Waiting for new chapter.............................
Release fast please....................

an unusual beginning for such stories, I hope the author will not lose his chance to write a great novel (and will not hit a jumping cultivation), well, it's over I wanted it to remain free:p