It's a good detective story. Synopsis short but it's eye catching. I like how the author describe everything. I'm very impressed with electric blue eye and raven blay hair. Good job. Keep going . Only first chapter published expecting more chapters
Good job on the plot. I like detective stories and action plots a lot, and I am looking forward to how its book works out. Good job author and keep up the good work. Good luck to you and looking forward to more chapters.
The concept is good. I like detective stories so....much. just keep updating more chapters so that I can read more of this story. Keep fighting Felix!!!!!!
This is my first time reading a story that starts with someone graduating from Harvard. I'm already impressed with Alastair for successfully making it through such a competitive place.
But to him my amazement wouldn't even be worth noting cause he has got more important things to focus on and even a few skeletons in his closet.
The story has just begun and there's already a lot of stuff that catches the readers interest.
Also as someone who kind of isn't very good at dressing up for university related events, I can relate to his lack of care on this matter.
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But to him my amazement wouldn't even be worth noting cause he has got more important things to focus on and even a few skeletons in his closet.
The story has just begun and there's already a lot of stuff that catches the readers interest.
Also as someone who kind of isn't very good at dressing up for university related events, I can relate to his lack of care on this matter.
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