Flower of Anarchy

According to the elders they should be moving in few moons or what is called as months to the wintertown as the words of Starks are "Winter is Coming".

"Alright, I'll join today. I could use some exercise," Charles replied, after which he followed Arjun down to the field. As they walked down to the field Charles could see the other boys setting up. He was also able to count how many people were down there, which ended up reaching 43. Although 3 other men came from some extra building that were on the other side of the fields. They carried a few netted materials with them. In one seemed to be oval shaped balls, in the other was some sort of padding, similar to the kick pads he had seen before, but oddly shaped with the top quarter of the pad seeming to extrude out.

He is amazed and when he hears me finish my sentence, he starts to get nervous. "Of-Of course, I have several female friends. I just asked a question" he says worriedly.

Angel

The writing quality is good at first, more description needed, however, the writer has been writing to the point things, which is suitable for this time of novel. more chapters needed.

Finally, an author review in the seventh slot for good luck!Thanks for reading!

Already loved the first chapter! Hope you continue writing.