Flip the Coin [BL]

Its a nice try to copy the MC of fullmetal panik and the storyline ( even if it is a little bit different). But the story is shallow as if written by EA, and the jockes are as lame as ****ing on youre girlfriend and telling her that it is a sign of love. Its like a kid who trys to play a prank, known by you and it think its funny like hell. Just dont waste youre time, couse no on will give it back to you.

The story is really very interesting since the character will have to see them as a woman in addition to not knowing anything about cultivation, the way the events unfold makes you want to keep reading since it turns out to be entertaining. The personalities of the people of the cultivation world are very well represented; I like the interactions since they are fluid.Well I suppose that the protagonist will have to accept who he is XD. I would advise other readers to read this novel.PS: The way you narrate is fine. You are on the right track as a writer!

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This Novel give  me the "Everyone is a returner" vibe, but much more interesting with lot of adventures and action...and the MC is.....really 😜....

If weren’t for the abhorrent misspelling and grammatical errors, it would be a decent read, but still kinda tough to enjoy the actual story cause the author will info dump you almost every third paragraph. Which feels like it is on purpose to raise the word count so the chapter cost more coins. For a first time writer the author isn’t the worst i’ve seen and it is somewhat still enjoyable but very taxing to read, because all the author does is word spaghetti.  Which means most of the time the author has a hard time trying to figure out what to say, so sometimes the chapter is 75% an info dump.  The pacing or flow could use a bit more work. Action scenes are alright but needs a lot more work, but to be fair writing good action scenes is hard.  Author you just need to plan a bit more on the build up to the climax. Plot could also use a bit more fleshing out with a clear path forward.

I nodded.

"Dad?" Lucius glared at him and said, "Where did you learn that word from? You will only address me as father or sir. If you don't, I assure you that you will feel the pain."

Nadii_ your quote about happiness was a great quote.