Firstborn Twisted Time

Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment

I appreciate your visit and I hope you keep reading my work.

I've read until the 50+ chapters and it keep me on the beat, after the explaining phase on early chapters the rest run smoothly, making more each chapters interesting and exciting

The start is good, easy to imagine. The writing quality is decent. The world scene is subtly presented. The work has potential. This is interesting. I dont have any negative reviews with the story yet.  Keep up the good work. :)

the kind of adventure i am searching 4!!
give this novel a chance! i vouch for this!
der are two ML and i am loving both! the two is pretty unique

Very interesting story. The place and situation is clearly described. While reading, I keep on asking my self "what is happening?" and "waaaa." It keeps me curious.

Reading the story is enjoyable and fun. The chapters are crafted to perfection. The author's descriptive skills really put him inside the novel. All I can say is that this novel is a masterpiece waiting for tremendous success.
So, I'm going to give the work five stars!

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.