First Light Of A New Age

it's a good novel but it just sucks because later chapters got premium but it's good i want to read more.....well u can just ignore this comment if u want.

I have read 60+ chapters and made the rating very lower suddenly because:

Writing Quality: Still good.

Story Development: The development seems a bit less interest. I just cant wait for their existence will be exposed and the whole world's reaction about them.

Character Design: I have no comments.

Updating Stability: I made it one star because whenever you published the chapter, I cant get to the next chapter ecause they are privilage. Its 4 times that I didn't get the new chapter, ive been immpatient for so long!!!

World Background: The more I read the story, the more about the Fantasy World seem like the other military vs fantasy stories, simple like any other. I want something like the modern ones has advanced tech vs fantasy with superhumans and powerful magic.

Bro the moment you put austronesian empire here in chapter 2 I am already hyping to read this.

This is one of the best novels I have read so far. The way everything started and how all the actions and the way to represent the situation in novel with such attractive meaning full words

Is gud. Read it or not idc, if you find it dumb then it's your problem.
I like it.









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Hey author, I hope you're still here, and I hooe you remember me. While you had dropped this story, I also hope you dont mind I made a story on Wattpad(I know, the gayish story app, but still has gold within a pile of pup) based on your story, but get rid of the cringe misogynist of poor writing villains and add more plot and twist, more chapters, more world building, more magic, more battles, and MORE SLAUGHTER FOR THE HUMANS!

Yeah, I just increased the difficulty level. While gate is easy level, japan summons is mid level, your story is at the hard level, mine just straight up Dark Souls level.

Just imagine fighting against a kilometer size sea monster, 5 demon lords, and Orcs that can walk on water like jesus. Yeah, thats what im going to do.

And if you like to, you can check it out