This is an updated review after reading 60 chapters,
Previously i felt the MC stupid for focusing on subclass as i believed it was a bad investment,
But thankfully the mc did change and has now focused more on becoming stronger(not as much as i want but good enough for now),
Considering the mc situation ill say his choices weren’t too bad(can’t expect him to be smart from the get go i suppose),
Although i still don’t like trickster/disguiser path as i dont like cheap tricks and prefer frontal battle where you simply crush and dominate your enemies,
But thats just an opinion and i like that the mc started to slowly focus on his main occupation (although ill still say he could be much stronger if he learns how to grind exp)
anyway the story is going in a good direction at the moment,
hopefully the mc keeps on his path and doesn’t become a goody two shoes self sacrificing selfless hero as i already have a phobia from these types of dense stupid MC’s( so far the NC has shown no signs whatsover that he will follow that crazy path thankfully)
Anyway good luck author I’ll Follow this story(occasionally ill give comments, i only give comments when im annoyed by the mc or a lead character, i cant help myself sometimes to rant whenever the mc makes a choice contrary to what i believe is a better choice and so it’s probably often,,,)
Anyway thanks for reading my lenthy unobstructive review.
Sorry for writing a review that is more of an opinion than a proper review.
This is my second comment about this novel. Just finished Volume 1. It is easily one of the top novels in the original section. You can feel the LOTM influence especially during the scenes where MC is thinking a lot. But, at the same time only real talent can let you write this. This story develops in it's own way and I'm so happy for that.
Finally a fire mage not some space, time, dream or dragon tired of this kind of novels.
Great book really enjoying reading the story.
Also will author introduce romance in the story ?
Great work author !
5 stars because of lord of mysteries vibe!
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Really good novel. I love the flow. You could also see some of LOTM vibes in parts of the story. The fights are awesome, written really well. I should mention even though you get the vibes you do get other original aspects as well. However, it's a system novel at the end of the day so it will be used as a crutch imo. Otherwise why even have the thing.
in one word amazing. one of the rare novels that gets better and better as times goes on and the ONLY novel that makes me spend real money on this website.
if you liked lord of the mysteries, you might like this even better since it's slightly more fast paced. I remember having things to nitpick about in the first 100 chapters, but it has been an amazing ride where the only thing I look forward to now is new chapters daily.
kudos author
This is great entertainment. Uses the system to great effect without relying on it too much to structure the story like so many other web fictions out there. Really digging the story so far. It's been action-packed and exciting from the very first chapter. Love how the protagonist is just thrown right into the drama from the start and must make sense of his world alongside the reader as the story progresses. Top quality web fiction right here with a fast-paced story and great action scenes. Everyone should get a piece of this!
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Previously i felt the MC stupid for focusing on subclass as i believed it was a bad investment,
But thankfully the mc did change and has now focused more on becoming stronger(not as much as i want but good enough for now),
Considering the mc situation ill say his choices weren’t too bad(can’t expect him to be smart from the get go i suppose),
Although i still don’t like trickster/disguiser path as i dont like cheap tricks and prefer frontal battle where you simply crush and dominate your enemies,
But thats just an opinion and i like that the mc started to slowly focus on his main occupation (although ill still say he could be much stronger if he learns how to grind exp)
anyway the story is going in a good direction at the moment,
hopefully the mc keeps on his path and doesn’t become a goody two shoes self sacrificing selfless hero as i already have a phobia from these types of dense stupid MC’s( so far the NC has shown no signs whatsover that he will follow that crazy path thankfully)
Anyway good luck author I’ll Follow this story(occasionally ill give comments, i only give comments when im annoyed by the mc or a lead character, i cant help myself sometimes to rant whenever the mc makes a choice contrary to what i believe is a better choice and so it’s probably often,,,)
Anyway thanks for reading my lenthy unobstructive review.
Sorry for writing a review that is more of an opinion than a proper review.
Great book really enjoying reading the story.
Also will author introduce romance in the story ?
Great work author !
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if you liked lord of the mysteries, you might like this even better since it's slightly more fast paced. I remember having things to nitpick about in the first 100 chapters, but it has been an amazing ride where the only thing I look forward to now is new chapters daily.
kudos author