Typical kid mc that is extremely arrogant and unlikeable, nothing new. It started of well with the mc background but slowly devolved into the mc being arrogant once br started to get stronger. Killing people constantly with no regards. Had potential but unfortunately bad mc development killed the story for me.
It's not a bad story, but sadly not for me, the plot twist at the end of the first vol was good, but I don't like those type of characters. then again that's taste not quality.
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the story seems ok but the translation quality makes it very hard to get into the flow of the story as your always trying to figure out what is happening.
Good story you should try to translate more I just can't wait to see the end and will it be a harem or R-18 scenes?? well you should add it if there will be girl but there are just too many choices
This is a good story, but the author needs to take note of improper tense usage and an awkward word choice. However, the author is able to paint such a vivid picture with his/her/their words that I felt very drawn into the story. Keep it up, author!
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