"Ah, I just want money." He nodded. "You consider us as having no skills, so this is a waste of time. You should just give us whatever shitty jobs are available."
Housekeeper Liu announced that they had arrived at Lé Amoúr Suites and Restaurant. The couple step out of the Maybach one after the other and proceeded inside the luxurious restaurant. Yan Qing Shan gave Zi Jue a sweet smile as he wrapped his arm around her waist possessively.
My main problem with this story is the lack of descriptions. I have seen no mentions kn the features of the characters, other then they are pretty or have a good body. That is not descriptive enough. Instead of saying talk about their hair color, height, etc. I do like the idea of the story so far and its interesting. Great job so far, keep up the great work!
Ok so I'm writing a review about my novel to say a few things.This is a story about Rhett, who, living in an earth teeming with monsters and rare creatures due to some portals slays an ice dragon out of self defense and is made king of the dragon slayers by the dragon slayers. So he slays dragons and levels up his system like ability. So this novel of mine is quite unique, although it follows most of the troupes, I wrote something I think is quite a masterpiece.The MC is certainly not overpowered so don't worry, I gotcha. He will be powerful but not like a demigod. Also, he won't be a suffering type, he might suffer but I won't craft them into long hefty arcs and make you bored.The first chapters might be a little too rushed and jumpy but go through, I made them so for a purpose and you'll thank me later in the novel.The MC’s system appears simple and not too interesting at first but trust me, it will be in the later chapters after he attains a rank.No harem, there will be romance but I won't focus too much on it. Also, this is a plot twisting novel so be expecting some plot twists and mysteries.And before you drop the novel or give it a bad review, I'll plead you read all the free chapters first.This is my first novel, so don't expect it to be perfect. I can assure you it's good but not perfect.The story also has quite a world building which will impress you(I hope). Overall, this is a unique story with intricate characters and a sort of pragmatic approach to events.Also, treat this as a QA and I'll do my best to answer all the questions asked.Happy reading!.
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