Another of these copy pasta, as I call them, "written simulations" novels. This genre is really bad, not only do we have these bad authors writing these, but the written simulation thingy is much more boring and disappointing than sign in and other things.
I'm worried for the author's health. I think he needs to go and get checked for Alzeheimers.
Fairly decent concept ruined by the execution and the author. The writing style is very dry and exposition-heavy, focusing on telling without showing. The author also has literal short term memory loss. For example, in one of the first 4 chapters, the author has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool. In the 5th chapter, he has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool (Yes, you did read that right and no, I did not mistype that. I am simply repeating what the author said). There are also already tons of plot holes and inconsistencies within the mere first 5 chapters, so I will be dropping this novel.
Sad. An interesting ability, an interesting MC, but everything else feels bland. You won't feel implicated in the story. Author has wasted a good setting with this book.
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Fairly decent concept ruined by the execution and the author. The writing style is very dry and exposition-heavy, focusing on telling without showing. The author also has literal short term memory loss. For example, in one of the first 4 chapters, the author has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool. In the 5th chapter, he has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool (Yes, you did read that right and no, I did not mistype that. I am simply repeating what the author said). There are also already tons of plot holes and inconsistencies within the mere first 5 chapters, so I will be dropping this novel.
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