Opening his bag, taking his takedown arrow, it looks like all the arrow had been broken half but it was n purpose because it can be put back and made carrying them very easy. He put all ten arrow on his arms reach, take one and start wrapping the silk around the arrowhead.
(This review is at 785 chapters)So, it's been over 500 chapters since my last review and I couldn't be happier with how this novel is progressing. Every aspect of this novel has gotten better by leaps and bounds compared to my last review (it might still be pinned, not sure). I'll break it down below.Writing Quality - 4.75 Stars: Everything is more fleshed out now. The fights are more intense and detailed, the interactions feel more real, and everything is more descriptive.Update Stability - 4.9: I think the author may miss a day every so often but it's usually on point.Story Development - 4.5: As more details get uncovered and secrets get wrapped up, even deeper mysteries are found and personally, I'm loving the direction it's heading right now.Character Design - 5: This went from one of the lowest rated to the highest. I won't spoil anything but as the story progresses, you are taught that the line between the "heroes" and the "villains" is very thin, almost non existant. Mistakes have consequences and no one is omnipotent. Everyone has a motive that keeps them moving and even the emotions of the regular soliders and citizens get their own time to shine.World Background - 4.5: Again, going from the lowest rated category to something amazing. The surroundings are detailed, the lives of the people in the federation and Abyss get more detail, and more about what lies beyond the current war is getting unveiled as the story progresses.Honestly, all I can say is it's amazing how far this novel has come and I HIGHLY suggest you all give it a read!
one of the few books I enjoy fofor the plot and not just because of the reading aspect dialogues are simple writing is easy to understand yet at no point it feels like story is lacking keep reading dawgs author is passionate and loves his book and I love the author for that keep writing bro we might be seeing a goat in the making
Ek ladki bhigi bhagi siSoti raaton mein jaagi siMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmDil hi dil mein chali jaati hainBighdi bighdi chali aati hain... (x2)Doondh laut ti huwi balka ti huwiSaawan ke suni raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat haiHmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si..Daagmag daagmag lehki lehkiBhooli badh ki behki behki... (x2)Machli machli gharse nikhliPaghli si kali raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si..Tan bheega hai sar geela haiUs kaa koyi pech bhi dheela hai... (x2)Tan ti jhukti chalti ruktiNikli andheri raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si
I absolutely love it but I hate some of the characters especially the ladies.like what the hell , can’t the mc just one girl following him around.this ain’t a harem novel.and I absolutely hate the girl yua.she just sees the mc at the and just start blushing.and waste of all roan ends up taking her home.this is a great novel but please specify coz some of us don’t like clingy people
This book is seriously underrated, and I just realized it! At first, I thought the author was just busy because their work was already super popular. But shame on us readers—we’ve been silently enjoying it without leaving reviews or comments! I used to be the same, just reading without saying a word, but not anymore. It’s time to show some love!
Hello guys, it's my first book here so I don't know if you are gonna like it. It's for the current contest I don't know if I'm going to win but I hope that many likes my book and support it.You are going to love my MC as much as I do, not only him but the rest of my characters. It's going to be slow paced at the beginning but after that, it will pick up the pace.Every day, I'll upload a minimum of two chapters Feel free to ask me questions under here or you can come to my Discord Dm@Lazypen1See yah♥️🌹
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