The story starts as a high martial arts story but takes an about turn into low xianxia fantasy with no rhyme or reason. The plot is pretty much non existent and the cultivation levels of the characters are all over the place. It is shown that the MC is pretty much a never before seen genius by becoming a half step grandmaster at his age but in just 5-10 chapters every one of his generation he meets are grandmasters. Pretty nonsensical. Changing the MC name to Victor is also a stupid decision. It sounds awkward when everyone has Chinese names and only he has a western name. Overall skip this trash and save yourself some time.
To be honest I expected this story to be terrible or for the grammar and plot to be all over the place. And for that I do apologize I did not expect for it to be a hidden gem. As of chapter 9 where you have written up to for us readers to enjoy the story is flowing very smoothly and while there are a lot of cliches, they are put in such a way that even though we know them they are actually enjoyable to read. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you if you are serious about this story and don't drop it or start to rush your chapters and give us half baked nonsense. Then this is looking to be a new favorite of mine. I saw you had no reviews and since I've never reviewed a story I thought hey why not do a first for the both of us. You have a great story here and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Have fun and for anyone reading this I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.
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The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.
Somewhat related to cultivation and Greek mythology. I'm a bit clueless about the level of cultivation it contains though. The explanation is confusing to me. Or maybe, I'm the one who's not interested in cultivation. And it seems I need to understand the background story of Greek mythology before reading this book. And yes, the main character is more suited to anti-hero tag.
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