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Its a really good novel, the grammar and sentance structure have minor errors but nothing huge or immersion breaking. I only have two complaints. One is the lack of a system interface as of chapter 45, a example of how this interface could look like is below.Name: XXXXLevel: XXPercentage to next level: XX%Technique: Ulimate XX Sword Skill Rank: Novice (+)And so on.The other compliant is how later on there is more inspiration taken from Way of the Devil than I would have liked but the early stuff is very original such as the different types of phyiques and sects.Overall this book deservea a solid 4.4-4.6 stars and the author should be very proud of all the hard work and they have put in to give readers like me such a good novel. Recommended, especially if you have never read Way of the Devil.
One of the things that make a good story is the character. And this novel has it. The interaction between the characters almost seems realistic--the author uses many interesting words to describe each of the dialogue. For the story development, it was slow pace in the early chaps but after that it'd pick up. Adventure and thrills wouls start to move around. With a beautifully crafted English languague and creativity, I would recommend you to read this.For the author, keep on writing. Story must be told.
The story was quite interesting.... Character development made me think something out of the box.. Good work and keep up the talent .. Also the way in which the story is laid is something which I think has been a part of your life.... But anyways quite a good novel...
That Hurt.Actually, it is my first time reading Realistic Fiction, and seriously it strikes.I love the way the characters are explained physically and emotionally through their actions and not through a monotone para.Love your Work Buddy!May People never go through these scenarios.✔✔
The beginning of the story reminds me a bit of the manga "Hakaijuu". Minus the end of the world part hehehe. The plot is great as are the ways the author describes the characters and setting. Great work!
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