Too cliche, was gonna rate it a three star but well, I saw Kirito on the cover and decided to take some points off. Too cliche, was gonna rate it a three star but well, I saw Kirito on the cover and decided to take some points off.
I find it stupid that people try to take this novel seriously and rate and review it. NO! What you're really here for is to read this god send novel full of incest, harem and a **** ton of sexs.Follow my lead brothers and stop pretending you hate it. Stop pretending to give bad reviews, afraid of others judging you. I say fk them. We all know that were horney fucks, we need materials and this god send novel supplys it, i wont lie i even couldn't make it past the chapter he fucks his mum cuz im to weak. I'll go into closed doors cultivation and return when im stronger. Atleast i know my limit and never give up unlike you bitches that run from the beginning. If you like it the say so, if not the quietly leave the room so my other brothers can come in. We ain't looking for good plot or character development, we just one the MATERIALS. Sigh if only the old hentai haven was still here i wouldn't have fallen this far.
I do like your novel, really do, its enjoyable from my end. Its just the references are overboard.. There are 2 death note references, 'I can't laugh yet. ' This is repeated twice. Then Of course there's classroom of the Elite, Grace seem to be a mix of kei and kushida, that hidden boss who Quinn fears kinda seem like Ryuuk but smarter and dangerous and plus he believe he believe someone is pulling the strings behind Class A and plus the hidden boss is from class C so yeah... And there was some code geass too but that's manageable. Plot seem kinda forced, I mean it seemed he just went from normal to super genius. And Lucas saying - 'Fear me' 'there's no way you can escape, submit to me'..and sometimes that emotional eyes. His character never gonna lie is cringey. I think for him you should focus on 'showing not telling'. Altogether, you can make people more realistic, plot development smoother and stop with the overly noticeable references and there you have it. A Great novel.
As soon as Red said that, the infant began to whimper, and Professor Oak quietly begged her not to scream again, that she'd stay with him until he found a good place, and that'd he visit. Under the incredulous eyes of his daughter and son-in-law, the infant went back to sleep as if by magic.
And it burns. The Rune that had protected me from myself for thousands of years is now waning, and it burns. All of it, all of what I feel burns in the dark ... the dark that has blinded me from long term exposure. The dark blinded me.
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