the story is good and the pacing is somewhat fast but i can see way too many similarities between overgeared and thisso i am hoping atleast in the upcoming chapters it won't be the same 😑
I read 30 chapters! The novel is interesting! Not easy! The character lives in two worlds! Dialogues are well written in the story! The world is described fascinatingly, creatively! The character of the character, I still do not understand until the end, but here you just need to read on! There is humor in the novel, there are also some deeper thoughts!I want to wish the author to be more attentive to details, if in doubt, specify, check. But this does not affect the general text block of the novel, it is really interesting, fascinating and intriguing!As an author, I could learn from this novel how to compose such interesting and lively dialogues! Bravo, author, thank you for such an interesting story!No wonder I included it in my library! I will read it slowly! Thanks for the wonderful written story!With admiration
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It was so good for the first 10-20 chapters then you begin to realize the MC is a complete spineless coward that sits around lazing around talking about how he wants some good life with no worries but it doesn't happen because he continues the running into dangerous situation for every little f****** thing but he's too f****** lazy and stupid to buy anything to make him more powerful so he doesn't have to worry about getting his ass kicked by something as pitiful as a trollAnd then you go to the twilight world radio acts like a f****** guy version of Bella swan being afraid of every little f****** thing oh and don't get me started on the harem it was pretty good in the earlier chapters because you can still hear the names but now there's so many in his harem that is still devolved to him just saying "I'm going out on a date with the girls" instead of individually saying their names because there's like 20 girls already in his harem and he's only been to like five worlds Not to mention the cultivation world's when it's just the author talking down to his readers constantly
John had a big smile on his face, so he had 2,500 points, if he wants, he can even create a second floor, which costs 1,000 points, with two floors he can receive even more points.
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