This book is Very Creative, I have read a lot of Video gamebooks but I find this one a little more interesting. Turing the Afterlife into a game is Unique in itself. The book is well written and has a few unexcepted surprises. What I am most excited about is upcoming enemies
Keep Up the Good Work
Wild-Bunni
Grammar mistakes aside, I think this story is definitely worth your time. Rarely have I been so drawn into a novel that I read the whole thing before I realized it. The Author has a mastery over pacing and exposition, and they make use of this to keep the reader immersed in a way that feels natural.
I like the way you use the system, and it reminds me of a few mangas that I've read in my time. I do truly hope that you continue with this amazing work, Author, as I look forward to reading more!
Eh, I just wanted a leave a review to say that this story is now premium, and that I will try to increase the quality of this story by a thousand percent. You can expect at least 1 chapter a day from me starting January first, maybe 3 - 5 somedays if things are going well, and... lots of heart warming harem scenes, so please forgive me for trying to make a living :D
It happens to be 9:26 AM when I'm writing this. I realized I had 8 reviews and that I can write another review at 11:00 AM where I am and will have ten reviews. I'm giving myself 5 stars because it's faster, and it will also increase my rating. This story deserves a high rating because I worked on it! Every author feels the same way! Give us all 5 stars please! hahahaha! In an hour, I will have 10 reviews! Then the spell of 10 reviews will be complete and you can see my rating!
Once a long time ago, a beautiful women, with large bouncy features, that liked to call herself king because she earned it after killing all her brothers, King Yama, decided to expand the universe in order to make a game for phantoms in the underworld!
After a long time of testing this new expanded universe, she said screw it and tossed some unlucky phantoms into that universe where even ghosts could make babies!
What will happen in this new expanded universe?
Find out in the next episode of random author's note!
"I think I would prefer actual oblivion to this afterlife.)
First I'd like to say that this story does seem to have some cool concepts. Setting the story in the actual afterlife is probably the most unique concept for a Isekai story that seem so obvious in retrospect.
Like how have we not done this sooner.
Anyway, they also flip the OP Power/Gift on its head but having the MC sell it for cash "Because it can't be too hard to level up right?" Not realizing that most people can't get past level 10 or 15. And the gift would have put him around level 30. That was actually funny, and a good way to have your cake and eat it too. And even if the afterlife shtick is only aesthetic it's cool to see. And its character driven, so points there.
But that's about it. Now for negativity.
Honestly, this is just Another, "get stronger to happy ending cultivation story." Just with an RPG level system, (which is overplayed by this point) and a Spooooky esthetic. The MC doesn't even meet historical figures, or dead friends and family. COME ON! It was right there.
It's just so hard to love something when it trades everything that could be considered unique or interesting for generic fluff. It's hard to stay invested.
And Yes I'm told that it "Gets Good" because all cultivation story's "Get Good." But you people know that that isn't a point in its favor, Right? Stick your leg in some acid and after a couple hours, yes you won't be in pain, yes. But taking the next step in your personal journey will be a bit difficult, won't it?!
How about we try this!
Why don't we write stories that are good all the way through rather than only 1% well written while swimming in a sea of 99% blandness.
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I needed a 10th review, so here I am again writing something about a story that I love dearly and hope that each of you read many a times over and enjoy it slowly like the tastiest food you could ever eat. Please let me know here if you have any questions, remember to vote for your favorite authors stories, and leave me a power stone or two or three so I know you exist. Appreciate it and woohoo! The spell is complete!
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Keep Up the Good Work
Wild-Bunni
I like the way you use the system, and it reminds me of a few mangas that I've read in my time. I do truly hope that you continue with this amazing work, Author, as I look forward to reading more!
After a long time of testing this new expanded universe, she said screw it and tossed some unlucky phantoms into that universe where even ghosts could make babies!
What will happen in this new expanded universe?
Find out in the next episode of random author's note!
"I think I would prefer actual oblivion to this afterlife.)
First I'd like to say that this story does seem to have some cool concepts. Setting the story in the actual afterlife is probably the most unique concept for a Isekai story that seem so obvious in retrospect.
Like how have we not done this sooner.
Anyway, they also flip the OP Power/Gift on its head but having the MC sell it for cash "Because it can't be too hard to level up right?" Not realizing that most people can't get past level 10 or 15. And the gift would have put him around level 30. That was actually funny, and a good way to have your cake and eat it too. And even if the afterlife shtick is only aesthetic it's cool to see. And its character driven, so points there.
But that's about it. Now for negativity.
Honestly, this is just Another, "get stronger to happy ending cultivation story." Just with an RPG level system, (which is overplayed by this point) and a Spooooky esthetic. The MC doesn't even meet historical figures, or dead friends and family. COME ON! It was right there.
It's just so hard to love something when it trades everything that could be considered unique or interesting for generic fluff. It's hard to stay invested.
And Yes I'm told that it "Gets Good" because all cultivation story's "Get Good." But you people know that that isn't a point in its favor, Right? Stick your leg in some acid and after a couple hours, yes you won't be in pain, yes. But taking the next step in your personal journey will be a bit difficult, won't it?!
How about we try this!
Why don't we write stories that are good all the way through rather than only 1% well written while swimming in a sea of 99% blandness.