I think I have to give five stars at everything since it only has one chapter for now. Although the chapter dumped a few information about the reader's needs, it was still an entertaining read! kudos for the author!
This was an interesting read.
Though the first chap was a bit of an info dump, it was still easy to read.
Writing quality is pretty good, with little to no errors.
I am not able to say much as only 1 chap out.
Still, if I have to be critical then I suggest describing the characters' appearance and the world around them like buildings etc.
Overall, good work there.
Good luck.
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Though the first chap was a bit of an info dump, it was still easy to read.
Writing quality is pretty good, with little to no errors.
I am not able to say much as only 1 chap out.
Still, if I have to be critical then I suggest describing the characters' appearance and the world around them like buildings etc.
Overall, good work there.
Good luck.
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