Evolution of a White Lotus

    Author: Carroter
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Reginald Jonson
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    Yeah.  I'm sure after reading this novel. A vengeful woman is the scariest creature in existence. I know her revenge is one hundred percent justified but, as a male, I still can't help but get the shivers whenever I think about it.
  1. Augus McDonald
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    Amazing. Not many words needed to describe this wonderful work. Really. It doen'T have slaps or OP just a flower lotus growing stronger. I never new killing a fish could be so interesting. Keep up the good job author!
  1. May Christ
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    I have been following this novel since I first saw it in the evolution writing prompt discussion. I’ve been reading this for almost a month, so I feel its about time I give it a review. (Well, the real reason for this review is that I felt bad the novel’s rating went down a .1 star and the review didn't give any reasons or constructive criticism. As a result, I’m writing my first review)

    There are some grammar and spelling mistakes/typos. However, which free, original novel doesn't have those? The writing errors do not get in the way of reading the story.

    The novel is updated almost every day(I think about 6 times a week, but I'm not gonna bother checking), which is more than what I was expecting. The author has school work that she needs to prioritize and she never guaranteed daily updates(she just said she would try her best to upload a chapter if possible), so I believe this is very good.

    Honestly, I was expecting the story to be a bit generic after reading the synopsis, which I wouldn't mind. I like those other books with revenge/reincarnation or cultivating female leads. However, I was pleasantly surprised to find the story was actually quite unique. I guess I should have expected that when the synopsis mentioned the MC reincarnated as a white lotus. However, I was focusing on the revenge/reincarnation part of the synopsis. The story is progress quite smoothly. There isn't really any filler chapters. I have yet to feel anything was dragged out longer than it needed to be. I don't want to spoil, so I’ll just say you can expect some sweet stuff(not romance though).

    So far, I love the character designs and their interactions. Although the MC wants revenge, she is not one of the evil MCs who are ruthless to all. She feels very human. The changes to her character appear very natural to me. I’m looking forward to how her personality develops throughout the novel(please keep updating author). Also, I’m quite a fan of MCs who are good at acting.

    Not too much has been revealed of the world yet. However, that is to be expected. It's still early on in the novel, so unless you want info dumps, you should patiently wait for the author to gradually develop the world(which I’m hoping she will do).

    This review is keeping in mind that the novel is still just getting started. After the story has progressed some more, I may write another review if my opinions change. Please keep up the good work author.
  1. Evelyn James
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    Thanks for the chapter
  1. Elton Nelson
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    I'm totally in love with this one. Great plot and amazing writing style. The development is smooth, the characters are absolutely great. Great work author.
  1. Hardy Ivan
    Hardy Ivan rated it
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    Love it, i love non human reincarnation. Can’t wait for more chapters to be posted. Keep up the good work, and keep the updates coming.
  1. Donald Judith
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    It's quite good novel as it isn't your everyday reincarnation novel so I would say give it a chance and you might accidentally find a good story

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