Start of the story is good but when you go to chapter 50+You start getting frustrated with the story. It seems the writer is somewhat new and decide to write story as he is thinkig without any planning
The complete lack of any consistencies, such as the 'dying and you can't respawn' part in chapter one, then 'oh you can respawn lol' in chapter 2, the absolute amount of chinese idiocy, SO MANY PLOTHOLES IN IT THAT PEOPLE WOULD THINK THE STORY AS OF A PATCHWORK QUILTIS GODAMNED KILLING ME
Hmmmmm!. The novel is gathering paces now. Right from intimation no. 4 to intimation no. 34 which led to many commotions, Valmon Dain is regarded as a ghost capable of knowing everything about the law breakers in entire London. Now officer Delbury and Shaughnessy began to act on every of his intimation which led to the captured of Willard Lyall's goons but to the puzzlement of Lyall, Tansy later discovered Valmon Dain to be none other than the man behind their misfortune. Whereas for them to be safe, they need to eliminate Dain but that turns out to be a suicide Mission for Willard Lyall. Despite all of Dain's persuasion, Willard Lyall wouldn't listen and section pull the trigger.
I liked the novel. I particularly liked that it was not rushed. The Background was correct. I love reading basketball novels. I want to read more like this. Don't stop
Really, the authors can't think of anything else than to make the Mc transmigrate into someone weak, I don't give it 1 star because I didn't read anything.
-Well, the good things, as you have very "cleverly" worded, are that I can even if slightly, influence the prices of things you can buy from the system shop, not the market place, that is ran by a separate system that exists in all universes that divine beings and anyone powerful enough can access. Congratulations on accessing the system shop last month, don't thank me, nope, I didn't help you out at all. By the way, things that are cheap might glitch beyond my control and jump from six points to one thousand, so don't be surprised when a one thousand point item drops to six points suddenly, in fact, purchase it before it is fixed.
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