The narrative is solid, but one aspect that doesn't sit well with me is how noticeable the plot armor is, especially when the protagonist, despite not being inherently powerful, seems to escape unscathed. It's particularly evident when her partner, who possesses remarkable strength, effortlessly dispatches all foes with a single hit. This creates a discernible reliance on plot armor that feels a bit too apparent for my liking.
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