ETERNAL SLUMBER: THE LAZY LORD WHO RULES THE WORLD

The vain attempt Werther had made to save the unhappy murderer was the last feeble glimmering of a flame about to be extinguished. He sank almost immediately afterward into a state of gloom and inactivity, until he was at length brought to perfect distraction by learning that he was to be summoned as a witness against the prisoner, who asserted his complete innocence.

Better than the first version cant wait for the new chapters to come after author uploads the old chapters

The story has potential, it lacks a lot of correction and editing work, not so much because it is poorly written and the line of action cannot be followed, but because it detracts from the rest of the positive things such as the plot. Perhaps lengthening the chapters a little more by introducing some more situational descriptions would also enrich the text. Good job

a bit hard to understand coz of pronoun being him and her and he and she coz not native

its amazing props to the author hope he keeps up the good work. would like to know what the release schedule would be though. more people should read this