Eternal Link VRMMORPG-[END]

I don't really understand. This thing is written in some kind of english language but you don't understand 9/10 of each chapter. It's really strange. I read the words and understand them but if you add the words into the sentence it just goes boof and you don't understand anymore.
How did you manage that?

Sorry but whatever this is, it is not a novel. Maybe it's some kind of secret message of a secret agency but it's definitely not a novel. I don't understand.

Fast paced and everything is ok-ish...But sometimes I question whether I reading English or other language....Pls,pls,pls improve your writing quality or you will keep losing your potential readers

Good

It would be good if it isn't fast paced. The story was too fast. Still good job. ✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔

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The story is really confusing at the start.
The like many game type system it all so suffers from unbalance and not really fair.
Annoying stupid Mc like always.

I had to drop this after reading to the 4th chapter that quality is horrible and you can barely understand what is going on. The sentences don't make sense half the time.