One of my favorite books I've read on here so far❤️ I absolutely adore the main character and the focus on his mental state in the earlier chapters and I'm very very excited to see where the relationships go
MC is very naive be you can see the development and the progress he makes to improve only himself but to help those close to him although I personally would like a bit more chapters with his relationships with his loved one (female and male friends )
Writing quality: There are very few minor mistakes, the grammar is really good and you cannot really complain about it
Character design: He is a kind soul, which a lovely mother, his childhoos is sweet and hard at the same time, but as the story you will see him grow up, and it makes even sense! No stupid character, no unnessesary face slapping, I like how he grows, how he behaves, and cant wait too see more
Stoey development: Given a second chance in a new world, he has to grow up from an innocent child to a strong cultivator, the beginning is a bit harder to read but get over it! At some point you can clearly see the flow of the story of this masterpiece
Update stability: 3 chapters a week are good but I truly wish for more
World background: nothing known of as for now, only some basics
around 50 chapter in and not much sign of harem (2 potential were even deflected). this is really good and but it look like it lack popularity. the synopsis honestly sound generic although i admit that i can't think any better. the conflict is well thought out without using those brain dead cliches villain (no father, grandfather, elder, and ancestors coming to get you). there is no system, power mostly come from pure godlike talent and hardwork.
this MC i don't know how to describe him but calling him a simp would probably be an insult to simps, his entire clan looks down on him but instead asks how he can help the clan, then he is given the job of cleaning the weapon while others cultivate..
It's been a long while since I've read a story on webnovel that can actually grab your attention, enthrall you with its characters, and make you believe in a world of fantasy. This is story is a gem. Author should be very proud
author here: I plotted this story out after reading many good novels on this site. I write for people to enjoy and saw the prompt lining up. please vote if you enjoy it feel free to offer ideas. please note, this story is ONLY on webnovel. cover will be updated later. Thank you all!
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Character design: He is a kind soul, which a lovely mother, his childhoos is sweet and hard at the same time, but as the story you will see him grow up, and it makes even sense! No stupid character, no unnessesary face slapping, I like how he grows, how he behaves, and cant wait too see more
Stoey development: Given a second chance in a new world, he has to grow up from an innocent child to a strong cultivator, the beginning is a bit harder to read but get over it! At some point you can clearly see the flow of the story of this masterpiece
Update stability: 3 chapters a week are good but I truly wish for more
World background: nothing known of as for now, only some basics