I would like to give it more stars but after reading up to 100 chapters I can not. The writing is great and I think the story had great potential but the MC kills the story.
He is a college student that in the game he is a complete idiot or has no common sense on anything. The Author tries to get away with this on the fact that the MC was from the country side. I find it highly unlikely that even someone from the country side would have never been expose to any stories or games related to cultivation or even fantasy. If that was the case, the Author should have said the MC grew up in a Cave where they just learn how to make fire. I tired to keep reading but once I got to chapter 100, I just can take it any more.
Excessive wish fulfilment, without logic. Stupid decision to justify plot.
Eg. Sell pill > make easy money > plot demand lack of money (for capsule) > Make stupid reason to get money when he is still loaded (25k in account and need 1k).
Somehow trying to justify situation. I tolerated this novel to my limit. I just cant continue it anymore.
This book is unique, it's different from other cultivation books I've ever read. The descriptions are detailed and vivid. The MC is interesting, and I also like the story development. It's surely a recommended book [img=recommend]
Book is a little slow paved for me. You don't really get much world background and the Mc is just way to dumb. I understand he is from the country but if he got into a decent college which seems to be the case he shouldn't be this stupid and clueless.
Started really good, but now the MC has made almost no progress in 300 chapters.
I’m now just skipping a lot of chapters as they don’t add anything. The Mc has stayed in the same sect and realm for 320 chapters.
I KNOW THAT MANY ARE THINKING THAT THIS NOVEL IS VERY SLOWPACED
AND EVEN I THINK THAT(BUT FROM THE LATEST CHAPTERS I AM DOUBTING THAT IT ISN'T SO CAUSE IN JUST TWO MONTHS AFTER RELEASING THE GAME PEOPLE HAVE REACHED LIKE TRUE EMPEROR REALM AND THERE MIGHT BE SOME PEOPLE ABOVE THAT, THAT HAVE YET TO SHOW UP).
SECONDLY, ARE TALENTED PEOPLE THAT COMMON OR ARE TALENTS THAT EASY TO ACQUIRE ?
I MEAN HEAVEN GRADE BODIES, IMMORTAL GRADE BODIES, GOD GRADE TALENTS ETC. THE NOVEL HAS DEPICTED MANY PEOPLE WITH SUCH TALENTS AND SOME HAVE EVEN DIED (ISN'T IT A BIT TOO FAST)
THIRD, IS CULTIVATION THAT EASY?
THERE ARE MANY CULTIVATION NOVEL OUT THERE AND ALL OF THEM TELL ONE THING FOR CERTAIN
THAT CULTIVATION IS A VERY LONG AND ARDUOUS JOURNEY, IT'S VERY DIFFICULT TO BREAK THROUGH THE HIGHER YOU GET, THE NOVEL ALSO SHOWS THAT BY INCREASING THE AMOUNT OF QI REQUIRED;
BUT PLAYERS HAVE REACHED CLOSE TO THE SAINT REALM IN TWO MONTHS OF CULTIVATION.
FOURTH, THERE ARE NO QUESTS.
FIFTH, SOME THINGS JUST GIVES THE FEELING OF IT BEING SHORT OR INCOMPLETE (CULTIVATION SYSTEM/ ALCHEMY SYSTEM)
SIXTH, THE PART WITH SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY(IS SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY THE ONLY RARE INGREDIENT ? AND IF ITS RARE LATER THAT CONCEPT ALSO KIND OF FADED AWAY AFTER SEEING THE MC GET SO MANY OF THEM) AND IF YOU PICK THE WRONG ONE THEN ALL WILL START WILTING BUT THERE MIGHT ATLEAST BE SOME ALCHEMIST WHO MIGHT/SHOULD HAVE RESEARCHED IT, ARE THE ALCHEMISTS THAT WEAK?
AND MC WAS ABLE TO GET THEM ALL ONLY BECAUSE OF THE ALCHEMY GOD'S INHERITANCE(WHICH IS SHOWN AS A TECHNIQUE IN THIS NOVEL) .
SEVENTH, IF THE GAME WORLD IS A REAL WORLD AND THE POWERS THERE COULD BE BOUGHT INTO REALITY, THEN THE AUTHOR SHOULD HAVE SHOWN THE SIGNS BY NOW;I MEAN THE MC DID GO THROUGH MORTAL CLEANSING .
SUMMARY- THERE ARE TOO MANY BLANK SPOTS(LOOP HOLES)OUT THERE WHICH LEADS TO THE FEELING OF INCOMPLETENESS.
THE NOVEL COULD HAVE BEEN MADE MUCH BETTER .
Plot is interesting... characters are well developed except the MC..he is the dumbest or most idiot guy I've ever seen..i mean he is going into a new world, he could have read something about it either online or from his friends but he did not..even he want to go blind in the game he could have used the library or ask information from other NPCs...his priority are not same.. I've read about 150 chapters but all I've seen MC in 2 sects and forest, that's it...he don't bothered to know about the city he is living in, it's history or geography or political situation...
it's one thing to make MC a naive one but to make him retard or a sheep.
100 chapters in and there is still no major plot. the MC is playing a game but I'm not sure what the story is about. splitting focus between the real world and the game world is unbalanced. the majority of the story happens in the game world and every update in the real world seems trivial. the MC doesn't really have any goals in the real world and the game aspect does not seem like a game, no other players interacting with the MC it seems like he is in a typical wuxia world with no consequences.
I read 150 chapters before finding myself thinking "why am i reading this?"
The MC is too overpowered. Everything is too easy for him, no effort whatsoever. It's supposed to be a game but that thing is broken because the MC has an unfair advantage. Maybe it's like Cultivation online and Cultivation is real irl but still. It gets old quick.
Characters are bland. We know nothing about them. MC has 3 roommates and aside from "he logged out and went to eat with his roommates" we never see them. No talk about their lives, their game characters, nothing.
Author spend more time describing his cultivation system than writing a real story. The game has no quests, you just cultivate non stop. You don't know the structure of the world. You get the names of the MC's city and of the country but that's it. Population? Sects? What's around? We don't know.
I don't know where the author wants to go because nothing actually happens. As for other players? I have no proof they exist because MC never saw one. Weird because everyone play the game.
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He is a college student that in the game he is a complete idiot or has no common sense on anything. The Author tries to get away with this on the fact that the MC was from the country side. I find it highly unlikely that even someone from the country side would have never been expose to any stories or games related to cultivation or even fantasy. If that was the case, the Author should have said the MC grew up in a Cave where they just learn how to make fire. I tired to keep reading but once I got to chapter 100, I just can take it any more.
Eg. Sell pill > make easy money > plot demand lack of money (for capsule) > Make stupid reason to get money when he is still loaded (25k in account and need 1k).
Somehow trying to justify situation. I tolerated this novel to my limit. I just cant continue it anymore.
I’m now just skipping a lot of chapters as they don’t add anything. The Mc has stayed in the same sect and realm for 320 chapters.
Really boring.
AND EVEN I THINK THAT(BUT FROM THE LATEST CHAPTERS I AM DOUBTING THAT IT ISN'T SO CAUSE IN JUST TWO MONTHS AFTER RELEASING THE GAME PEOPLE HAVE REACHED LIKE TRUE EMPEROR REALM AND THERE MIGHT BE SOME PEOPLE ABOVE THAT, THAT HAVE YET TO SHOW UP).
SECONDLY, ARE TALENTED PEOPLE THAT COMMON OR ARE TALENTS THAT EASY TO ACQUIRE ?
I MEAN HEAVEN GRADE BODIES, IMMORTAL GRADE BODIES, GOD GRADE TALENTS ETC. THE NOVEL HAS DEPICTED MANY PEOPLE WITH SUCH TALENTS AND SOME HAVE EVEN DIED (ISN'T IT A BIT TOO FAST)
THIRD, IS CULTIVATION THAT EASY?
THERE ARE MANY CULTIVATION NOVEL OUT THERE AND ALL OF THEM TELL ONE THING FOR CERTAIN
THAT CULTIVATION IS A VERY LONG AND ARDUOUS JOURNEY, IT'S VERY DIFFICULT TO BREAK THROUGH THE HIGHER YOU GET, THE NOVEL ALSO SHOWS THAT BY INCREASING THE AMOUNT OF QI REQUIRED;
BUT PLAYERS HAVE REACHED CLOSE TO THE SAINT REALM IN TWO MONTHS OF CULTIVATION.
FOURTH, THERE ARE NO QUESTS.
FIFTH, SOME THINGS JUST GIVES THE FEELING OF IT BEING SHORT OR INCOMPLETE (CULTIVATION SYSTEM/ ALCHEMY SYSTEM)
SIXTH, THE PART WITH SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY(IS SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY THE ONLY RARE INGREDIENT ? AND IF ITS RARE LATER THAT CONCEPT ALSO KIND OF FADED AWAY AFTER SEEING THE MC GET SO MANY OF THEM) AND IF YOU PICK THE WRONG ONE THEN ALL WILL START WILTING BUT THERE MIGHT ATLEAST BE SOME ALCHEMIST WHO MIGHT/SHOULD HAVE RESEARCHED IT, ARE THE ALCHEMISTS THAT WEAK?
AND MC WAS ABLE TO GET THEM ALL ONLY BECAUSE OF THE ALCHEMY GOD'S INHERITANCE(WHICH IS SHOWN AS A TECHNIQUE IN THIS NOVEL) .
SEVENTH, IF THE GAME WORLD IS A REAL WORLD AND THE POWERS THERE COULD BE BOUGHT INTO REALITY, THEN THE AUTHOR SHOULD HAVE SHOWN THE SIGNS BY NOW;I MEAN THE MC DID GO THROUGH MORTAL CLEANSING .
SUMMARY- THERE ARE TOO MANY BLANK SPOTS(LOOP HOLES)OUT THERE WHICH LEADS TO THE FEELING OF INCOMPLETENESS.
THE NOVEL COULD HAVE BEEN MADE MUCH BETTER .
it's one thing to make MC a naive one but to make him retard or a sheep.
The MC is too overpowered. Everything is too easy for him, no effort whatsoever. It's supposed to be a game but that thing is broken because the MC has an unfair advantage. Maybe it's like Cultivation online and Cultivation is real irl but still. It gets old quick.
Characters are bland. We know nothing about them. MC has 3 roommates and aside from "he logged out and went to eat with his roommates" we never see them. No talk about their lives, their game characters, nothing.
Author spend more time describing his cultivation system than writing a real story. The game has no quests, you just cultivate non stop. You don't know the structure of the world. You get the names of the MC's city and of the country but that's it. Population? Sects? What's around? We don't know.
I don't know where the author wants to go because nothing actually happens. As for other players? I have no proof they exist because MC never saw one. Weird because everyone play the game.
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