Soo Min turned off the TV she hates murders and murderers. She hates it, She can't control her feelings about all of this. She knew very well how it fells to lose someone, to see that person dead in front of you and being unable to do anything but just crying over that.
I surveyed the man that claimed that he was the last chief our people, while he rattled on about how I can save his people and how he can complete the last wish now. "Shush" I said exasperated "Yes ma'am" Quoron said back respectively and then he went quiet for about 5 minutes and then he went back to rambling.
Your Authoring Technique Is Seductive, Easily Drawing Readers Into The Moment. But I Think You Should Work On Your Dialogues A Bit, Cuz At Times I Can't Differentiate A Dialogue From An Inner MonologueBut Apart From This, I Love You! You're The Best!
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