seeing her friend with Dan will only pacify her conscience. I'm sure she wished she was really dating her boss. when the boss took her to the hospital, she didn't object, neither did she call him later to apologise. I blame her sorely.
the book needs some work...ok, a lot of work. i get the idea and wanting a different ending. it seems like there could be a second book, a follow up if you decide to continue. maybe that would help. i do like it but it needs work. im not being mean. im being honest. keep on writing, you have talent.
"Now that the restriction that the Almighty One put upon us is elevated, its time for you to die. Don't worry though, we won't send you to hell. Instead, we will take your soul with us and torture you till the end of the world. HAHAHA" Uriel laughed like madman while releasing his aura.
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