Escape From Paradise

The story is very interesting with interesting characters. I hope there will be more chapters in the future.

One thing I would like to suggest is to divide the longer paragraphs into shorter paragraphs. Maybe it is just me but it feels harder for me to read.

Amazing, your writing style on your story is truly amazing. Even at the first chapter it got me hooked into it, so keep on going at the story, I can't wait.

your writing quality is very good. I like it very much. your synopsis is very eye catching . Seriously the first chapter got me hooked. keep it up and update more.

okay, Chase and Mwe's character development in just 3 chapters is done pretty effortlessly, 3 chapters isn't enough to judge it but the fact that 'god is dead' in the synopsis got me curious to dive right into the book, the description and the world build of heaven and how it might be is done well, isn't a wordy novel so its easier to process for non-native English speakers too, plus the plot seems to be heading into a fineass direction

Only read 2 chapters for now. Need more chapters to discern the overall plot of the story, but so far it seems good and has the potential to turn into something big. Waiting for more chapters to be published.

By looking at the synopsis and first chapter. I can see that MC got serious about the journey. Hope there will be good character development for this unique plot.

The first chapter was enough to hook me. The plotline, writing style, and characterization were great. I like the voice that the characters emit.

I think it could be better if some paragraphs were to be divided since it was too long and the main idea was different from the other part. That was just my concern, but overall it was a really great story.

Well it's only the first chapters, but the chapter title, well it was quite something. Thought the actual thing was different from what I was thinking and the story was quite astrounding. But I hope you update more frequently. I will be waiting for the rest to come