Epic Of The Second Strongest Demonic Blade King

Aye yo, I don't know about second blade king xhing cheng or zhong ding dung, but that boi over there looks like Kayn ngl....

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You did a good job making mc a villain. The events were fun but the problem is with a lot of information and superpowers that you quickly give him, this leads to confusion for the viewer as it is difficult to keep track of these many abilities, mc is acting a bit reckless towards people stronger than him, on the whole the most thing  sexy is mc character good luck

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I think there is something wron with the 5 Stars Reviews....

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Well, this ist a good one, but i hope the Mc will not turn into a guy who kills innocent people like its nothing and become a detestable who you can't bring yourselve to like.

I think the story is pretty good and sort of interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

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The concept was good and interesting but the execution was disappointing
The main things that got me to drop this were that You over explain things, You under explain things, The story was rushed and The emotions didn’t feel realistic Partly because it was rushed but also because it didn’t feel like you had a good enough grasp of the emotions you’re trying to bring to the table I guess you could say
And of course the Slight but annoying grammar errors

I’m not trying to say that you don’t have talent or that you should give up I’m just saying that this could be better and that it was disappointing

if its only the second strongest then its trash                                                           .