Endzone: Simulated Apocalypse

check this out guys✌️

So, firstly, just so you know, author, I rarely give full 5-star reviews lol. If you look at the last few reviews I've done, I'm sure that you will notice that none of them have received full marks so that alone should tell you the entire story.

Synopsis: Very nearly done. It's well organized, precise, and tells what the story is about in full glory. No complaints there.

Story Development: Let's just say it assassinated all doubts I had going in~. The character is already a killer and while I was hoping you didn't follow the cliche route with an assassin that seemingly enjoys killing, it was still well done.

Character Design: Your descriptions were fluid and I had no issue trying to picture how your character looked. Some readers rather to imagine their characters, however, so it's also a matter of preference. But well done.

Finally, I can see why you're #1 in WPC #234 so far. This is coming from the current 5th place participant *cough*. I wish you all the best and keep up the good work. You're sure to win if you continue like this!

Good read, hoping for more chapters!
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Ill give a try to this one, i checked the other ones and mage of primordial chaos did catch my attention but once i saw the tragedy tag i ran away xD

As the creator of the character of Ragnar, I have had somewhat (albeit, not at all that large compared to Cyclxne) of a hand in the creation of this book - but I only chose to do so because of how much potential I saw in it day one. The writing is awesome, the premise is so good I wish I'd come up with it myself. Definitely something I would buy in a bookstore.