Translation quality is good and it would be a fairly good novel if it wasn't for the fact that the plot has been reused more times than is actually countable. The characters are basically brain-dead and each obstacle is as easy to overcome as the last.
Seriously disappointing. Contrived and forced "hardship" plot points. The one that made me stop reading was when the author decides to write that the fate fragment decided to do something that will forever prevent the MC from being able to use his fate powers and doesn't tell him until she gets called out by someone else,, which makes the fate fragment useless, conniving trash. It was a completely idiotic plot point, and ruined the entire plot and made me immediately despise the character which pretty much ruins the entire story since she's the second most important character after the MC.
(Review 150 chapters+)Positives: The story is very good, with many intriguing mysteries, the real and virtual worlds are very interesting and the game system is great. It's very good to read, with a consistent pace. The story doesn't move too slowly or too fast. Negatives: At the beginning of the work, the author abuses the status window a lot, sometimes unnecessarily. But then he fixes it. I think the care and jealousy of the protagonist's family is too exaggerated. The fascination and adoration the girls feel towards the MC is also exaggerated. SUPER NEGATIVE (ROMANCE - WITH SPOILER): In my opinion the author is making a huge mistake with the relationship between the protagonist and Amanda. She has always loved the protagonist, always wanted his good and cares about him. When the MC unfairly became angry with her because of the incident, she continued to love him, always tried to talk to him and suffered alone for a long time. And after the MC finds out the truth, he friendzones her. He loved her and now the author wants to end it all. Whyyyyy?? On the other side is Luna. The protagonist interacts with her 3 times and in these 3 times the time they interact is a few hours. But that's already being enough to want to arouse feelings for her. DOES NOT MAKE SENSE! and it's unfair to Amanda. Sorry for any mistakes. Google translate.
Very well written so far, it has a "I solo level up" isekai feel which you will understand once you get to chapter 13, fight scenes are good anddont bore the reader. Looking forward to how it progresses :)
This is the 69th review, how auspicious. The story is very good and must be written by a very handsome, well-adjusted person. It's about a snake, a most magnificent creature, who disguises himself as a human through magic. Being a human is confusing, of course, and the first parts of the story is about adjusting to his dumb slightly-more-human allies and trying to make them successful. Once he figures more things out, he kills people he doesn't like, and lives his best life. Hopefully, everyone lives happily ever after, from there. It tends to never work out perfectly-- probably because humans are involved.
OMG this storyline sounds A-AMAZING, and soo exciting!🤩I really hope it gets good ratings FAST so I can read more! I am sure this will be a BLAST!!!🙌🏼❤️
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