This is a cute story! Fast paced, and not to drawn out. Im not sure if it’s over or not. But that was a decent closing if it is. Good writing, nothing spectacular, but the action and intrigue kept me going. For now my advice would be to expand descriptions in the action scenes they get foggy.
He wrapped the arrows and also picked up arround 15 pieces of metal bear traps. He then walked up to the village elder and he handed him a pocket mirror.
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